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  1. saboohi mazhar

    shoaib sb. apko noval ki jagha drama ya film likhni chaye ap nay story ko itna drag kiya hai jis ki koi had nai story ko acha kernay k leay mushkail urdu ka istimal kerna mera nai kheal k acha hai legend writters ko b pharnay tu who log b amm zaban istimal kertay hain i think story achi hai but bhuat lambha kiya gaya hai isko hopefully ap is ko positive layn gy.

    thanks
    Saboohi Mazhar
    Lahore

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